Score: 6

"Not bad for a beginner..."

submission: Stick Fight of Some Doom

date: March 25, 2009

I could tell that you're just a beginner so I'm giving you a 6 for this. Primarily for the music, because it seems unique to what I usually hear on NG, and the effort because you said it was your first flash. I'm learning flash myself, and I also have a hard time trying to animate sometimes.

But what you can improve on is frame rate, and improving the animation because it was extremely jerky. Even though stick fighting is what some might say overused, or not cool, all you can do is just try to add something original to it, and add like a really good plot. Learning flash animating is also a major plus, and it's needed.

Overall, I found it okay, but I can see that there's a lot of potential that you have. I hope my review helps and it wasn't going to make you think TL;DR.

Score: 9

"Great Game!"

submission: Crazy Car

date: December 29, 2008

It's a great game if you're targeting it at a younger audience!The car's looks cute,but not too cute(which is good though). But what you can do is add some more backgrounds,give a few more choices of cars to choose from,and maybe a few more colors.I'd say give this flash a good score.People only think it sucks because it's made for kids.

Score: 8

"Not bad at all..."

submission: Mouthsinging: AS

date: December 19, 2008

It's not that bad!But if you're a newbie to animating, then it's okay if you're not the best.Just improve.Pick the songs you feel are best for you, and by the way, I love the Lion King one...Maybe you can do a Lion King sync sometime?*Massive Lion King fan*

Score: 9

"Not bad..."

submission: TaT's A.Y.B.A.B.T.U

date: November 17, 2008

It's not bad for your first flash!But just try to improve the animation more.It's a little choppy at parts.

Score: 10

"Awesome Game!"

submission: Hanna in a Choppa

date: November 14, 2008

Everything was applied so well!Especially the music!I've already played this game for a pretty long time!It's one of the best physics-based games I've played in a long time! 5/5 and 10/10!

Score: 10

"Great Story!"

submission: Lary the Lion

date: November 11, 2008

Although the flash could use a little animation and some sounds,the story and graphics make up for it.It's supposed to be a childrens' book.But the story was great like I meant to say earlier.It's great work,but it's missing an element or two.

Score: 10

"EPIC WINZ!"

submission: Rick Roll Flash

date: October 30, 2008

LOL!The ending was funny! 5/5 and 10/10!

Score: 8

"Not Bad..."

submission: Text Adventure! v0.4

date: October 26, 2008

I'm giving you a 8/10 because this is one of your first flash games,and I understand that you can't do advanced things and it's pretty good for a beginner.But it would be nice if you added a few pictures and some music.If you did,it could increase your rating.It's still very good though. :)

Score: 10

"EPIC WINZ!"

submission: You just fell 4 the trap

date: October 26, 2008

EPIC WIN!It's not trap...but it's an awesome flash! 5/5 and 10/10!

Score: 10

"Some of the Best Flashes on Newgrounds!"

submission: Calvin and Hobbes

date: October 24, 2008

Although I think that the intro could be a little longer,it's great! It's some of the best flashes put on NG! 5/5 and 10/10!