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Stick Fight of Some Doom Stick Fight of Some Doom

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 25, 2009

Not bad for a beginner...

I could tell that you're just a beginner so I'm giving you a 6 for this. Primarily for the music, because it seems unique to what I usually hear on NG, and the effort because you said it was your first flash. I'm learning flash myself, and I also have a hard time trying to animate sometimes.

But what you can improve on is frame rate, and improving the animation because it was extremely jerky. Even though stick fighting is what some might say overused, or not cool, all you can do is just try to add something original to it, and add like a really good plot. Learning flash animating is also a major plus, and it's needed.

Overall, I found it okay, but I can see that there's a lot of potential that you have. I hope my review helps and it wasn't going to make you think TL;DR.


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Ice-cold-wolf responds:

There is a story line behind this but its hard to catch because it bases around our lives...so if you don't know us you don't pick up all the references...mainly we put this up to get some feedback for improvment. The framerate will be better next time...with the hassle we had getting it into flash It got recorded at 200 fps then compressed to 40 fps then further compressed to 30 and finally to 10....so it got a little messed up...next time we hope to animate fully in flash


Mouthsinging: AS Mouthsinging: AS

Rated 4 / 5 stars December 19, 2008

Not bad at all...

It's not that bad!But if you're a newbie to animating, then it's okay if you're not the best.Just improve.Pick the songs you feel are best for you, and by the way, I love the Lion King one...Maybe you can do a Lion King sync sometime?*Massive Lion King fan*



TaT's A.Y.B.A.B.T.U TaT's A.Y.B.A.B.T.U

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars November 17, 2008

Not bad...

It's not bad for your first flash!But just try to improve the animation more.It's a little choppy at parts.


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Recent Game Reviews


Crazy Car Crazy Car

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars December 29, 2008

Great Game!

It's a great game if you're targeting it at a younger audience!The car's looks cute,but not too cute(which is good though). But what you can do is add some more backgrounds,give a few more choices of cars to choose from,and maybe a few more colors.I'd say give this flash a good score.People only think it sucks because it's made for kids.


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Hanna in a Choppa Hanna in a Choppa

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 14, 2008

Awesome Game!

Everything was applied so well!Especially the music!I've already played this game for a pretty long time!It's one of the best physics-based games I've played in a long time! 5/5 and 10/10!


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CMU responds:

Thanks for the kind words, glad you enjoyed yourself!


Lary the Lion Lary the Lion

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 11, 2008

Great Story!

Although the flash could use a little animation and some sounds,the story and graphics make up for it.It's supposed to be a childrens' book.But the story was great like I meant to say earlier.It's great work,but it's missing an element or two.