Score: 6

"Not bad for a beginner..."

submission: Stick Fight of Some Doom

date: March 25, 2009

I could tell that you're just a beginner so I'm giving you a 6 for this. Primarily for the music, because it seems unique to what I usually hear on NG, and the effort because you said it was your first flash. I'm learning flash myself, and I also have a hard time trying to animate sometimes.

But what you can improve on is frame rate, and improving the animation because it was extremely jerky. Even though stick fighting is what some might say overused, or not cool, all you can do is just try to add something original to it, and add like a really good plot. Learning flash animating is also a major plus, and it's needed.

Overall, I found it okay, but I can see that there's a lot of potential that you have. I hope my review helps and it wasn't going to make you think TL;DR.

Score: 9

"Great Game!"

submission: Crazy Car

date: December 29, 2008

It's a great game if you're targeting it at a younger audience!The car's looks cute,but not too cute(which is good though). But what you can do is add some more backgrounds,give a few more choices of cars to choose from,and maybe a few more colors.I'd say give this flash a good score.People only think it sucks because it's made for kids.

Score: 8

"Not bad at all..."

submission: Mouthsinging: AS

date: December 19, 2008

It's not that bad!But if you're a newbie to animating, then it's okay if you're not the best.Just improve.Pick the songs you feel are best for you, and by the way, I love the Lion King one...Maybe you can do a Lion King sync sometime?*Massive Lion King fan*